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飛天掃把"The Speeding Broom"
(1)Main characters:
Witch
Flower the cat
East the mouse
King of ants
(2)Long ago, there lived an old witch.
She liked to fly a broom.
(3)She had a speeding broom.
She remembered she had won the speeding contest last year.
“I have to win it again this year,” she said.
(4)One day, she took out the broom and tried to fly the broom.
“I must forget the secret of the broom.”
The broom couldn’t even move.
(5)She looked over the cave.
“Where is my magic book?” she said to Flower, her cat.
Flower the cat showed up immediately.
(6)Last time, Flower was punished with no food for three days.This time, he responded and reacted much quicker.
He said, “I wonder East the mouse might steal it“
(7)“Then, let’s go find him. I am going to drown him in a cage.”
The witch and Flower the cat met an elephant on the way.
Elephant told them,
“East the mouse is playing by the river.”
(8)The next, witch and Flower met a wolf.
“Wolf, have you seen East the mouse?”
“Yes, he is playing by the river,” wolf said.
(9)The third, witch and Flower met a rabbit.
“Rabbit, have you seen East the mouse?”
“Yes, he is playing by the river,” rabbit said.
(10)They finally came down to the river and saw the river was flooded.
Yesterday a heavy rain fell hard.
Flower the cat yelled in a hurry, “Oh, no. Something float in the middle of the river.”
(11)The witch gave a spell in no time. There up in the air, a bird suddenly became an eagle and saved East the mouse from the river.
(12)The witch asked unhappily, “you, the pity East, did you steal my magic book?”
“No, of course not.”
“But I saw some ants walking around the cave yesterday.”
(13)The witch hurried back to the cave, and found the magic book stayed nearby. It seemed there were something underneath. Some ants were pressed down by the magic book. The witch picked up the magic book and saved those ants alive.
(14)The king of ants said, “Sorry, Highness the witch, we are deeply sorry to steal the magic book. We just try to make more apples on the tree. Somehow, the book became heavier and pressed down all of us.”
(15)The witch said, “OK, you are all punished already, I don’t want to hurt you. Go to work, and don’t be lazy.”
(16) The old witch examined the magic book why her broom couldn’t fly. Oh, it was because she forgot to add in gasoline. The broom ran out of gasoline.
(17)The witch asked Flower to buy some gasoline. Flower brought back gasoline 98 octane unlead. The broom then groaned and shaked. It seemed there was no way to stop it.
(18)Last year, the witch won the contest with gasoline 95 octane unlead. This year, she applied with gasoline 98. Did anyone guess right who would win this contest?
第二集
回覆刪除1 巫婆參加掃巴飛天大賽，如願的衛冕冠軍。九八無鉛汽油讓這支掃巴飛得更快。
老巫婆騎了掃把，正好趕上一年一度的法術大會。也因為掃把加了新買的九八汽油，當然老巫婆又贏得今年的騎掃把快速競賽。
old witch won the contest again with no exception.)
2. 隔天，巫婆要小花貓再去買汽油。她對小花說「平時，我們加便宜的油就可以。最近汽油很貴呢！」
3. 所以，小花買了最便宜的油：柴油。哎呀！不得了，巫婆的掃巴因加入柴油，後面起火，燒了起來。
4. 掃帚尾巴燒壞了，巫婆說「我不要這把掃巴了，我要換一支新的。」巫婆一向很時尚，她不喜歡烏黑的東西。於是，便把掃巴扔在貓羅溪旁。
5. 有一天，一位小女孩經過溪旁，看到那支掃巴，她想，「這把掃巴只是黑了點，我可以帶回家掃落葉。」
6 小女孩走呀走，她有點累，便坐在掃巴上休息。說也奇怪，這支掃巴竟然浮起來，還會往前進呢。
7. 小女孩抓緊掃巴頭，掃巴會隨著她意志轉向。沒多久她就可以輕易地操縱。
8. 小女孩本來都沒有朋友，「如果我拿這支掃巴，去幫助別人的話，說不定大家會喜歡我。」
9 小女孩開始幫大家提書包去安親班，大家都很高興。
10．小女孩又幫大家提水桶，大家都爭先恐後的要和她做朋友。
11. 小女孩也幫大家摘水果，從此都叫她做「飛天小魔女」。
12. 但有一天，掃巴動也不動，掃巴飛不起來了， 她很沮喪。並且，小朋友不再喜歡她了。
13. 過了很久，有一天，小女孩救了一隻掉到水的小白兔。小白兔看到她拿著巫婆的掃巴，便對她說，「小女孩！謝謝她救了我。我告訴妳這支掃巴的秘密，這支掃巴是一位巫婆的掃巴，它需要加汽油才飛得起來。」
未完
1 巫婆參加掃把飛天大賽，如願的衛冕冠軍。因為，九八無鉛汽油讓這支掃把飛得更遠更快。
回覆刪除The old witch won the contest again with no exception. Gasoline 98 unleaded triggered the broom speeding more far and fast ever.
2. 隔天，巫婆對小花貓說：「平時，我們加便宜的油就可以。最近汽油漲價，油很貴呢！」
On the next day, the old witch said to Little Flower, “we need cheaper gasoline for practice.
3. 所以，小花買了最便宜的油：柴油。哎呀！不得了，巫婆的掃把因加入柴油，後面起火，燒了起來。
Therefore, Little Flower brought back diesel, the cheapest one. Oh, no! The broom got fire.
4. 掃帚尾巴燒壞了，巫婆說：「我不要這把掃把了，我要換一支新的。」巫婆一向很時尚，她不喜歡烏黑過時的東西。於是，便把燒焦的掃把扔在貓羅溪旁。
The broom was scorched. The witch said, “I don’t need this one any more. I will get a new one.” Then, she dumped it to the riverside.
5. 有一天，一位小女孩經過河邊，看到那支尾巴焦了的掃把，她想：「這支掃把尾巴只是黑了點，我還可以帶回家掃落葉。」
One day, a little girl passed by the riverside. She thought, “this scorched broom still work for the leave sweeping.”
6 小女孩回家的路上走呀走，她有點累，便坐在掃把上休息。說也奇怪，這支燒焦的掃把竟然浮起來，還會往前進呢。
On the way back home, she felt tired and took a rest on the broom. Surprisingly, the broom lifted her up and moved forward.
7.沒多久，她就可以輕易地操縱。
Not so long, she could handle it easily.
8. 小女孩本來都沒有朋友，她說：「如果我拿這支有魔力的掃把，去幫助別人的話，說不定大家會喜歡我。」
The girl said, “If I help others with this magic broom, they will like me.”
9 小女孩開始幫大家提書包去安親班，大家都很高興。
The girl helped carry bags to afterschool.
10．小女孩又幫大家提水桶掃地，大家都爭先恐後的要和她做朋友。
The girl helped carry buckets of water and sweep the floor. Now, everyone wanted to make friend with her.
11. 小女孩也幫大家摘水果，從此都叫她做「飛天小魔女」。
The girl also helped pick some fruit. She was named, “the sky magic girl.”
12. 但有一天，掃把不動了， 她很沮喪。當她無法幫忙，小朋友就不再喜歡她了。
However, the broom couldn’t move the other day. She was sad. She couldn’t help any one, and children don’t like her anymore.
13. 有一下雨天，小女孩救了一隻掉到河水裡的小白兔。小白兔看到她拿著巫婆的掃巴，便對她說，「小女孩！謝謝她救了我。我告訴妳呦：「這支掃把是一位巫婆的，它需要加汽油才飛得起來。」
On a rainy day, the girl saved a rabbit from drowning in the river. The rabbit saw her with the broom, and said, “this broom belonged to a witch. It can fly, if you apply with gasoline”.
14. 從此小女孩天天練習，她資質聰穎，她很快的就能飛得更遠，也飛得更快，似乎有破以往紀錄的可能。因此，她獲准參加下次的掃把飛天比賽。
Day in and night out, the talented girl seemed to drive the broom better than before. She was nominated to the speeding contest. .
15．巫婆聽說最近有位小女孩，身懷有飛天的絕技，知道她是可敬的對手。巫婆看到小女孩竟然拿著她的舊掃把。
The witch heard about the girl who could speed broom fast. She came and saw the girl indeed fly with her old scorched broom.
16．天性狡猾的巫婆叫她的小花貓買一桶柴油，準備趁小女孩不注意之際，加進小女孩的掃巴。
The sly witch called Little Flower to play trick by adding diesel to the broom.
17．第三年的飛天比賽正式開始，誰會贏得最後的勝利呢？下集將會揭曉。
The third year contest just began, and the competition was tightened. Who will win the contest then? The answer will be seen next.