The lion and mouse

Once upon a time there was a ferocious lion. He lived in a dark forest. One day he fell into a hunter's net. The net covered hime completely. Suddenly the enormous lion saw a tiny mouse. "Please help me," said the lion. "How can I help you?" said the mouse. "You are much smaller than me. "You can climb inside this net," said the lion. "And your little teeth are sharper. You can cut the rope." So the mouse climbed inside the net and chewed and chewed the tough rope. Soon the lion was free. "Thank you, "said the lion.

英文作文

若把名詞喻為寫作的建材,那動詞就是噴射機的燃油,因為動詞可以驅動你的文字。而與使用名詞一樣,儘量避免使用平淡無奇的動詞,而改用生動富有色彩的動詞。特別盡可能少用be動詞(如am, is, was, will be等)。
Emily was nervous before the interview. → Emily trembled and bit her nails before the interview.
The car came to a halt. → The car screeched to a halt.
“Are we there yet?” Meghan asked. → “Are we there yet?” Meghan whined.
The lawnmower made noises and stopped running. → The lawnmower sputtered and died.
“I hate this!” she said unthinkingly. → “I hate this!” she blurted out.
Robbie walked quickly up the stairs to see his date. → Robbie sprinted up the stairs to see his date.