全民英檢 中高級作文 2

題目:(寫一百五十至一百八十個字)

★★★ 如何寫描寫文呢?

也是啟(introduction)、承(point to point explanation, focus with a topic sentence)、轉(move on to main content)、合(sensational ending) 的結構作文:

例一:

My Mom

     ((My mother is a kind and gentle woman.)) She is always very gentle. She takes good care of her children and keeps them all at school. I have two brothers and two sisters. So she gets five children in all. She gives us every comfort we need. We all love her very much. 廣泛性的介紹/聚焦我的媽媽 第一段要有主題句子~~((主題句子))

     My mother has too much to do in bring us up. As our family is not rich enough, my mother always hits to do a lot of work. She gets up very early and sleeps very late every day. She works very hard, yet without complaining. My mother is also a thrifty and industrious woman. She saves every penny that she can to keep everything in order. As she has been busy ever since she was young, she looks older than she really is. Her face is wrinkled, her hair becomes silver white, some of her teeth become movable. But she works as hard as ever. 主體內容

     My mother often says to us," work while you work, play while you play. If you did not work, you will become lazy and of no use to the society." What a good piece of advice it is! We must worth it well and always keep it in our minds. 令人感動的句子



例2
Stay With Me
Guess it's true, I'm not good at a one-night stand /我想是真的 我不擅長獵艷尋歡
But I still need love cause I'm just a man /而我需要愛情 因在怎麼說我也只是個人
These nights never seem to go to plan /那些沒約會的 寂寞夜晚
((I don't want you to leave, will you hold my hand?)) /我不想你離去 你是否會緊握我不放手  
簡單的介紹句子/聚焦((主題句子))

Won't you stay with me? /你會不會留在我身旁
Cause you're all I need /因為 我只需要你
This ain't love it's clear to see /這不是愛 淺顯易見
But darling, stay with me /但親愛的 陪著我
主體內容

 Why am I so emotional? /我為何會如此動情?
No it's not a good look, gain self control /這不是好現象 控制好自己
And deep down I know this never works /在心中某處 感覺這永遠行不通
But could you  lay with me so it doesn't hurt /但你可以躺在我身旁 讓我安心
令人感動的句子



例3
Food and Service in Your Restaurant



55 Chin Shan South Road Sec. 2
TaipeiTaiwan 10603
Taiwan, R.O.C.
21/7/14

Robert Yang
Head Chef
Bob’s Chef Restaurant
No. 16 Beijing East Road
Linya District, Kaohsiung City 802
Taiwan (R.O.C.)

Dear Mr Yang,

Re: Food and service in your restaurant

簡單的介紹句子 I am writing to complain about the standard of food and service in your restaurant.(啟) I had a favorable impression of your restaurant until I actually dined there on Saturday 19th July. (承)聚焦主題句子 The waiters were rude and it took an hour just to order our food. (轉)

When the starter dish came, the chicken was cold so we asked for it to be warmed up. It came back hot because unfortunately someone had put chilli powder into it. My friend was enjoying a dish of fish when she started to chew something very crunchy. She looked at her fork, only to discover half a cockroach. As for my tasteless pork dish, I dread to think what was in it.主體內容

At last, we left the restaurant. Yesterday I received a bill from you for the meal which I have no intention of paying. I hope that you will sort out these problems immediately, so that no other customers should suffer the same experience.結論

Yours sincerely,
(signature)
Mary Wang

英文作文--訓練的方法與技巧

英文作文--訓練的方法與技巧

相信自己:要改變自己的寫作,就一定要相信自己會成功。

一、訓練方法:1. 每天至少用5分鐘想像寫作。
2. 每天放聲大笑10次,樂觀面對生活,放鬆心情。

二、寫作技巧訓練:寫作技巧在作文有很重要的比例,而自我訓練如下:
1. 每天至少5分鐘提筆,展示自己的寫作能力;培養寫作的習慣,要寫得燦爛、寫得真誠,鍛煉寫作力。
2. 訓練接受他人的回饋,培養自信和觀察能力。

三、話題資訊:平時我們會看電視,看報紙,看雜誌,看書,交談,觀察。在這些活動中,有可以拓展話題的源泉。拿一個本子,把在這些活動中聽到看到想到的趣事,要事,重要觀念,好句子等記下來或剪貼下來,然後一天記下一兩句或一兩件趣事。(在記憶東西的同時,要思考那些觀點,概念。有了一個深思的過程。談起來就得心應手了。

四、寫作訓練
1. 朗讀訓練十分鐘朗讀(最大聲,最清晰,最快速)朗讀的內容:古今中外的經典演說,儘量找點積極豪情的(當然這要根據你希望成為什麼樣的人來定)比如馬丁路德“我有一個夢”,聞一多的“最後一次演講”,喬治巴頓的“戰爭造就英雄豪傑”等等。每天訓練自己“三分鐘演講”一次或“三分鐘默講”一次。每天練習5分鐘的繞口令。
2. 二十分鐘嘮叨訓練:
  a.走到街邊見到什麼說什麼?比如見到一位老大媽提著籃子走過來,你立刻可以說我現在瞧見一位老大媽走來,她穿著什麼樣的衣服,走路的姿勢怎麼樣,還有高矮肥瘦,外貌特徵以及心理等等。
  b.無限關聯法或者口語接力訓練。先指定沒有聯繫的A物和B物,然後儘量拖時間從A物談到B物,其中可以編故事,說道理,反正你的說話就是不能間斷和猶疑。
 3.交談訓練:不要只顧自己的口才訓練成果,你要去留意他人在談些什麼?他人有興趣是什麼從他人的交談中,找到自己知道的知識、常識及見識,切進去產生交集。開始你的談論、但要注意他們的唇、肩、手、眼神...等等。如果他要發表意見,從他的肢體上,可以發現對方要發言,這時要學會聆聽,尊重他的發言權。

五、幽默訓練
1.每天找一條笑話,把笑話背熟,反復操練,盡可能講的風趣幽默詼諧(笑話要求簡短易背的,這樣容易產生成功感,這個我盡可能負責每天打出一條在《每日笑話》裡,大家可以跟,也可以自己打在《每日笑話》裡自己跟自己的,反正這個《每日笑話》就是集中笑話由每個人選擇去練的)
2.每天務必在工作或生活中找到一個東西事物的幽默一下。最好就是當眾幽默,實在不行事後自己也可以自嘲幽默補一下。

六、輔助訓練
每天至少20分鐘閱讀勵志書籍或口才書籍,培養自己積極心態,學習一些技巧。學會檢討,每天總結得與失,寫心得體會。每週要全面總結成效及不足,並確定下周的目標。

七、★★終極目標:鍛煉寫出最美的句子,鍛煉最簡潔的段落,鍛煉最流暢的文章。
自我激勵誓言:我一定要大膽地寫作,我一定要有美詞佳句,我一定要寫出最流暢的作文。

八、☆☆短期目標實現時間:30天
一、積極心態訓練
1、自我暗示:每天清晨默念10遍“我一定要最大膽地寫,我一定要最大聲地唸文章,我一定要最流暢地寫作。我一定行!今天一定是幸福快樂的一天!”(平常也默念或寫出來,至少10遍。)
2、想像訓練:至少5分鐘想像自己在寫作,想像自己成功。
3、至少5分鐘在鏡前學習微笑,展示自己的自信。(5分鐘)

二、寫作鍛煉
(一)每天至少10分鐘深呼吸訓練。
(二)抓住一切機會寫作,鍛煉美詞佳句。
1.每天至少與5個人有意識地交流思想。
2.每天大聲朗誦文章或大聲講至少5分鐘。
3.每天訓練自己“三分鐘寫作”一次或“三分鐘默唸”一次。
4.每天給親人、同事至少講一個故事或完整敘述一件事情。
5.注意寫作的一些技巧。
  A.寫作前,深吸一口氣,平靜心情,面帶微笑,眼神交流一遍後,開始寫作。
  B.勇敢地寫出第一句話,句子長一點,意思淺一點,寫短句,句間不打岔。
  C.當發現緊張卡殼時,停下來有意識地深吸口氣,然後隨著寫出來。
  D.如果表現不好,自我安慰:“剛才怎麼又緊張了?沒關係,繼續平穩地寫”;同時,用感覺和行動上的自信戰勝恐懼。
  E.緊張時,可以做放鬆練習,深呼吸,或盡力握緊拳頭,又迅速放鬆,連續10次。

三、輔助鍛煉
1.每天至少20分鐘閱讀勵志書籍或口才書籍,培養自己積極心態,學習一些技巧。
2.每天放聲大笑10次,樂觀面對生活,放鬆情緒。
3.練接受他人的視線、目光,培養自信和觀察能力。
4.培養微笑的習慣,要笑得燦爛、笑得真誠,鍛煉親和力。
5.學會檢討,每天總結得與失,寫心得體會。每週要全面總結成效及不足,並確定下周的目標。

九種啟頭寫作 http://zh.scribd.com/doc/29627024/Ways-to-Start-a-Composition

例子:
 For the Sake of Other Men(為幫助别人而活 by 愛因斯坦)

[照錄音CD背,但寫的時候,改寫成作分格式]

Strange is our situation here upon earth (at school). Each of us comes for a short visit (stay), not knowing why(the reason), yet sometimes seeming to divine (prepare for) a purpose(主旨). From the standpoint of daily life(view一般而言), however, there is one thing we need to know, as man is here for the sake of other men(第一段要看到你寫了作文的主題句子和主旨).
Many times I realize how much my life is built upon the helps of my fellow men (my friends), and how earnestly I must exert myself in order to give in return as much as I have received. My peace of mind is often troubles by the depressing sense that I have borrowed too heavily from the work of other men (my friends). To ponder interminably(unceasingly不停地) over the reason for the meaning of life in general seems to me to be sheer folly (a clear foolish idea愚笨). And yet everyone holds certain ideals by which he guides his aspiration and his judgment. The ideals which have always shone before me and filled me with the joy of living are goodness, beauty, and truth.


Above all (In conclusion結論), for those whose smile and health depends on, and also for the countless unknown souls with fate, we are connected by a bond of sympathy. To make a goal of comfort and happiness has never appealed (been interesting感興趣) to me, a system of ethics (moral principle道德體系) built on this basis would be sufficient only for a herd of cattle (some foolish people). 

She Looks So Perfect (本週2014/8/2 全美告示牌專輯冠軍) by 到暑五秒

來自澳洲的偶像樂團「到暑五秒」(5 Seconds Of Summer)攻克困難的美國市場,首張同名專輯以25萬9千張銷售量,空降本周全美告示牌冠軍~

Simmer down, simmer down
冷靜下來,冷靜下來
They say we're too young now to amount to anything else
他們說我們還太年經去承諾些什麼
But look around
然而
We worked too damn hard for this just to give it up now
放棄對如此投入在其中的我們實在太難
If you don't swim, you'll drown
若不奮力一搏,怎知道還有什麼可能性?
But don't move, honey
不能逃避阿,親愛的你

★★☆☆
原唱:(播放影片,要再多按一下 劃線的部分)

怎麼下載Youtube影片??雖然簡單,但還需要多練習幾遍喔

1. 在YOUTUBE上,複製它的網址。
2. 再到這個網址:    http://adf.ly/UPuHB   (按此直接聯該網址 )
3.接著一步一步來吧  (按下圖,圖會變大喔…):









例子:

 1. 先下載youtube影片,到電腦裡


2. 再用微軟的Movie Maker,加字上去

培養英文感: What I wanna be 未來我想做個(消防隊員,糖果人、醫生)


1. Fireman 消防隊員 (歌詞:http://www.kidsongs.com/lyrics/i-wanna-be-a-fireman.html )
2. Candy man 糖果人 http://www.kidsongs.com/lyrics/candy-man.html
3. Doctor 醫生 (Theme Bones 骨頭歌)http://www.kidsongs.com/lyrics/them-bones.html

培養英文感:A day at Old MacDonald Farm 麥當勞農場的一天

本片無法分享,需複製網址觀賞: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ERApeKW29dc

1. Old MacDonald Had a Farm 麥當勞先生的農場
2. Shortening Bread 油酥麵包
3. Here we go around the mulberry bush 繞桑樹
4. Mary had a little lamb 瑪麗有隻小羊
5. This old man 這老人
6. Skip to my Lou 跳繩歌
7. Take me out to the ball game 看球賽
8. John Jacob Jingleheimer Schmidt 約翰 雅各
9. She'll be coming round the mountain 伊比呀呀
10. Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star 一閃一閃亮晶晶

查歌詞: http://www.kidsongs.com/downloads/songs?p=1

培養英文感: Let's Play Ball 打球吧


1. It's not if you win or lose不在輸贏
2. Practice makes perfect 熟能生巧
3. Bend me, shape me 磨練
4. I get around 轉一下
5. Over the river 過河
6. Footloose 輕鬆一下
7. Rah, Rah, Sis, Boom, Bah 勝利
8. Catch a wave 衝浪
9. Centerfield 中外野
10. You know that you can do it 你可以的

查歌詞 : http://www.kidsongs.com/downloads/songs?p=1

培養英文感: A Day at Camp 夏令營的一天



歌名:
1.The More We Get Together當我們同在一起
2.The Caissons Go Rolling 彈藥向前行(美國軍歌,小四音樂課本有,有些老師會教直笛)
( 歌詞: http://www.kidsongs.com/lyrics/the-caissons-go-rolling-along.html )
3. Fishing Blues釣魚藍調  ( http://www.kidsongs.com/lyrics/fishin-blues.html )
4. On the Top of Spaghetti 義大利麵
5. Ninety Nine Bottles of Pop 九十九瓶汽水
6. Pop Goes the Weasel 黃鼠狼跑了
7. Found a Peanut 找到一顆土豆
8. The Ants Go Marching 螞蟻行軍
9. Boom Boom, Ain't It Great to be Crazy瘋狂很棒
10. The Animal Fair 動物展覽會
11. Little Bunny Foo Foo 小兔子
12. Pussy Cat 波斯貓
13. Baa Baa Black Sheep 黑綿羊
14. The Old Grey Mare 老灰馬
15. I Had a Little Rooster 小公雞
16. Whistle While You Work 吹口哨
17. The Hokey Pokey 變戲法
18. When the Saints Go Marching In 聖徒遊行
大都歌詞可從網路上查到 ( http://www.kidsongs.com/downloads/songs?p=1 )

培養英文感: Yankee Doodle Boy 洋基好男兒~


歌名:
★1.Yankee Doodle Boy 洋基好男兒
    2. America's Heroes 美國英雄
★3. Home on the Range 山頂上的家園 (歌詞:http://www.kidsongs.com/lyrics/home-on-the-range.html)
★4. I've been working on the railroad 我在鐵路上做工 ( http://www.kidsongs.com/lyrics/i-ve-been-working-on-the-railroad.html )
★5. Oh, Susanna 噢,蘇珊娜 ( http://www.kidsongs.com/lyrics/oh-susanna.html )
★6. Deep in the heart of Texas ( http://www.kidsongs.com/lyrics/deep-in-the-heart-of-texas.html )
    7. There's a hole in my bucket 水桶有個洞
    8. Turkey in the straw 稻草堆裡的火雞
★9. If I had a hammer 如果我有一把鎚子 ( http://www.kidsongs.com/lyrics/if-i-had-a-hammer.html )
    10. You're a grand old flag 老舊的國旗
    11. Living in the USA 住在美國